Top three stories

1. Ha Le     The Antique Box

This is a wonderful story. First, the story is easy to understand for every reader. Second, the logical of paragraphs and outline make sence. Third, the author used a lot of dialogs in her story. The dislogs make the story vivid. What's more, the author used many different words to express the same meanning. As required, every inventory was used. I think this is a good story.

   2.  Emily Schleif    Dream of events- Story in a Box
This is a nice story. The word choice and the logical flow of paragraphs are clear. The outline is very clear so that the readers can easily understand what author said. The story is an unusual story, that's a dream of a young girl. The story has a lot of detail descriptions so readers will feel the story is vivid and easy read. Author didn't tell readers the story is a dream, but at the end of the story, "I just had one of the craziest dreams; let me tell you about it.”The last sentence tells us this is a dream.

   3. Qian Wang   Memory Coffee shop

The title of the story just like a love story,  in fact the story is about many stories from different people who buy the stuff in the coffee shop. The form of the article is new and unique, this will catch readers' eye. The author used many dialogs in her story. The dislogs make readers feel they just in the stories. The article is easy to understand and the logical of paragraphs are clear. Every inventory was used. This is a good story.